Chapter 6: The Identity She Tried to Steal
My mother’s words stayed in the air long after the call ended.
“She was trying to take your identity.””
I stared at the blank screen of my phone.
For a moment, I thought I had misheard her.
Because a baby?
A pregnancy?
Those things were terrifying enough.
But my identity?
That sounded impossible.
Like something from a nightmare.
And yet, knowing Daniela, I should have known nothing was impossible.
Andrés was watching me.
“What did she mean?””
I slowly lowered the phone.
“I don’t know.””
But my voice betrayed me.
Because deep down, I knew my mother had finally opened a door she had spent years trying to keep locked.
“What did your mom say?””
I looked at him.
“She said Daniela wasn’t only trying to take the baby.””
My throat tightened.
“She was trying to take my identity.””
Andrés went completely still.
“What does that even mean?””
“I don’t know.””
I hated saying those words.
Because my entire life, I had been the person who tried to understand everyone else.
I analyzed.
I forgave.
I searched for reasons.
But now I was realizing something painful.
Sometimes there wasn’t a reason.
Sometimes people simply decided they wanted something that belonged to someone else.
And they convinced themselves they deserved it.
The police returned later that afternoon.
This time, they came with more questions.
The forged hospital paperwork changed everything.
The officer placed copies of the documents on the table.
“We need to understand your sister’s relationship with your pregnancy.””
I looked at the papers.
“My sister has always been obsessed with being involved.””
“Obsessed how?””
I hesitated.
Then I told the truth.
“She chose things for the baby without asking.””
The officer wrote it down.
“She bought furniture for the nursery.””
“She argued about names.””
“She told people she would be there for the birth.””
“Did she ever say anything that concerned you?””
I thought back.
Every strange comment I had ignored.
Every moment I had dismissed.
Then I remembered one.
It happened six months earlier.
At my apartment.
Daniela had been standing in the nursery.
The walls were painted a soft cream color.
The crib was empty.
Waiting.
She had run her fingers over the blanket I bought.
“It’s strange,” she said.
I laughed.
“What?””
She looked at me.
“How natural this looks.””
I didn’t understand.
“What do you mean?””
She smiled.
“I mean… you don’t even look like someone who’s going to have a baby.””
At the time, I thought it was just a weird comment.
Now?
Now it felt different.
I told the officer.
His expression changed slightly.
“Did she make other statements like that?””
“Yes.””
I swallowed.
“She said things like she always imagined herself becoming a mother first.””
“And what did you say?””
“I told her she would have her own family someday.””
The officer nodded.
“And how did she respond?””
I closed my eyes.
“She said, ‘Maybe.’”
A cold silence filled the room.
Because suddenly that word sounded like a warning.
That evening, my mother came to the hospital again.
This time, she came alone.
No excuses.
No gifts.
No carefully prepared apology.
Just exhaustion.
She looked like someone who had finally run out of places to hide.
“I owe you the truth.””
I looked at her.
“Yes.””
She sat down.
For several seconds, she stared at her hands.
“When Daniela was sixteen, she found out she couldn’t have children.””
I didn’t move.
“She was devastated.””
I nodded slowly.
“She never told me.””
My mother looked up.
“She didn’t want you to know.””
“Why?””
“Because she didn’t want your sympathy.””
That sounded exactly like Daniela.
She never wanted kindness.
She wanted power.
“What happened?””
My mother took a breath.
“She went through treatment. Several doctors. Several tests.””
“And?””
“She was told pregnancy would be extremely difficult.””
I looked down.
“So she became obsessed with mine.””
My mother didn’t answer.
She didn’t need to.
“How long did she know?””
“About your pregnancy?””
“Yes.””
My mother looked away.
“Before you told us.””
My stomach dropped.
“How?””
“She saw the test.””
I frowned.
“What test?””
“The one you threw away.””
I remembered.
Two years earlier, when Andrés and I had been trying to conceive, I had taken countless tests.
Negative.
Negative.
Negative.
Then finally positive.
That morning, I had been so shocked that I left the test on the bathroom counter while I called Andrés.
Daniela had been visiting.
“She saw it?””
My mother nodded.
“And she told you?””
“No.””
“Then how did you know?””
My mother’s face changed.
And I knew.
“She told you.””
“Yes.””
I laughed quietly.
A painful, empty sound.
“So she knew before me.””
My mother looked guilty.
“She was excited.””
“No.””
I shook my head.
“She wasn’t excited.””
I looked at her.
“She was claiming it.””
My mother didn’t argue.
“Why didn’t you tell me?””
My mother’s eyes filled.
“Because I thought it would hurt her.””
I stared at her.
“You protected her feelings.””
“Yes.””
“While she was planning to take my child.””
My mother looked down.
“I didn’t know how serious it had become.””
“Mom.””
My voice broke.
“She pushed me down stairs.””
Tears rolled down her face.
“I know.””
“No, you don’t.””
I pointed toward the hallway.
“You weren’t the one lying there.””
She nodded.
“You’re right.””
For once.
She admitted it.
And somehow that hurt more.
Because I had spent years waiting for her to admit when she hurt me.
But hearing it now didn’t fix anything.
“What does identity mean?””
My mother became quiet.
Too quiet.
“Mom.””
She looked at me.
“Daniela believed she should have your life.””
I frowned.
“My life?””
“She always compared herself to you.””
“That’s not new.””
“No.””
My mother’s voice lowered.
“It became worse after she found out Andrés and I were helping you financially.””
I looked confused.
“What?””
“She thought you had everything.””
I almost laughed.
“Everything?””
My mother nodded.
“She started telling people you were lucky. That things came easily for you.””
I looked at the floor.
The apartment we struggled to afford.
The miscarriage.
The years of trying to have a baby.
The nights I cried alone.
Easy.
That was what Daniela saw.
“She became convinced that if she had your life, she would finally be happy.””
My skin crawled.
“What does that mean?””
My mother hesitated.
Then opened her purse.
She pulled out a small envelope.
“I found this in Daniela’s room.””
My heart started racing.
“What is it?””
“I don’t know.””
I opened the envelope.
Inside were printed photographs.
Not random photographs.
Pictures of me.
At work.
At my apartment.
With Andrés.
At doctor appointments.
I looked up.
“She was watching me.””
My mother whispered:
“Yes.””
I turned over the final picture.
And froze.
It was me sleeping in a hospital chair during my first pregnancy after the miscarriage.
I remembered that day.
Only three people knew I was there.
Me.
Andrés.
And Daniela.
My fingers shook.
“Mom…”
She looked terrified.
“There’s something else.””
“What?””
She swallowed.
“Before the baby shower…”
My heartbeat increased.
“What?””
My mother looked at the door.
Then whispered:
“Daniela changed her name on some documents.””
I stared.
“What documents?””
My mother’s voice became barely audible.
“Documents that made it look like she was you.””
A cold silence followed.
Then my phone buzzed.
A message.
From Daniela.
Only one sentence.
*“Ask Mom why she never told you that I almost became Mariana Alvarez.””*
I stared at the screen.
Because suddenly I understood.
This was bigger than my baby.
Bigger than the delivery room.
Bigger than the fall.
Daniela hadn’t just wanted my daughter.
She wanted my entire life.
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And somewhere in my family’s past…
Someone had almost let her have it.
