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Chapter 3: The Daughter Who Came Back

The first thing I felt was relief.

The second thing I felt was terror.

*“Dad, I’m coming home tonight. I know Mom is lying.””*

I read Sofia’s message again.

Then again.

My daughter knew.

Somehow, she knew.

For five months, I had been trapped inside this room, listening to Beatriz rewrite the story of my life.

She told nurses I was unaware.

She told doctors I had no meaningful responses.

She told relatives that I was “still the same Matthew, just not really here anymore.””

But now I knew one thing.

My daughter had never believed her.

My fingers moved toward the phone.

Slowly.

Painfully.

I typed.

*“Don’t come.””*

I stared at the words before sending them.

They looked wrong.

Cruel.

My daughter was finally reaching for me, and I was pushing her away.

But I knew Beatriz.

I knew what she was capable of.

If Sofia came home without knowing the danger, she would walk straight into the same trap.

The message sent.

A few seconds later, her reply appeared.

*“No.””*

I almost smiled.

That was my daughter.

The same girl who argued with me at sixteen because she wanted to drive in the snowstorm and I told her it was too dangerous.

The same girl who crossed her arms and said, “Dad, you can’t protect me from everything.””

She had always been stubborn.

I never realized how much that stubbornness would save us.

Another message appeared.

*“I’m coming because I need to see you.””*

Then:

*“And because I need to tell you what Mom did.””*

My heart tightened.

What could Beatriz have done to Sofia?

I typed:

*“Where are you?””*

The response came quickly.

*“Thirty minutes away.””*

Thirty minutes.

I looked toward the door.

Thirty minutes until my daughter walked into a house where everyone except her was hiding something.

I typed:

*“Be careful.””*

Her reply came.

*“I am.””*

Then:

*“Dad, I need you to trust me.””*

I closed my eyes.

That was the hardest thing about being trapped.

Everyone thought I was powerless because my body wouldn’t move.

But the truth was worse.

I had to depend on other people.

And after learning my wife and brother wanted me dead, trusting anyone felt impossible.

A soft sound came from the hallway.

Footsteps.

I quickly locked my phone screen.

The bedroom door opened.

This time, it wasn’t Beatriz.

It was Dr. Gabriel Mena.

The man who had stood beside my bed while discussing my death.

He walked in carrying a medical bag.

His expression was different.

Not confident.

Not cold.

Afraid.

He closed the door behind him.

“Matthew,” he whispered.

My eyes stayed fixed forward.

“Please.””

The word surprised me.

Doctors didn’t beg.

Not in my experience.

He pulled a chair beside the bed and sat down.

For several seconds, he said nothing.

Then he looked toward the door.

“She told me you couldn’t hear.””

I remained still.

“She lied.””

My heart pounded.

Was this another trick?

Was he trying to see if I would react?

Gabriel rubbed his face.

“I made a mistake.””

A mistake.

That was the word people used when they wanted forgiveness without admitting the damage they caused.

He opened his medical bag.

“I need you to understand something.””

He pulled out a small bottle.

“My job was supposed to be rehabilitation. Monitoring your recovery.””

He looked at the bottle.

“But Beatriz changed that.””

My fingers twitched beneath the blanket.

He noticed.

His eyes widened.

“Matthew?””

I froze.

Too late.

He had seen.

For a moment, neither of us moved.

Then Gabriel whispered:

“You’re awake.””

I wanted to answer.

I wanted to scream at him.

Instead, my fingers moved once.

Yes.

His face changed.

The guilt there was impossible to miss.

“Oh God.””

He stood quickly and walked away from the bed.

“I thought…”

He stopped.

“What did you think?”” I wanted to ask.

But my mouth refused to cooperate.

Gabriel looked back at me.

“She told me you had no awareness. She told me the medication was only to keep you comfortable.””

He swallowed.

“It wasn’t.””

My entire body went cold.

“What was it?”” I wished I could say.

He seemed to understand.

“The medication slows your nervous system.””

A pause.

“Too much of it could cause complications.””

Complications.

Another word people used when they didn’t want to say murder.

“Why?”” he whispered.

Not why did Beatriz do it.

Why did he help?

“I was in debt,” he said quietly.

The answer disgusted me.

Not because I didn’t understand desperation.

Because I did.

I had spent my life helping people who were desperate.

Including my brother.

Including Beatriz.

“Your wife knew about my financial problems,” Gabriel continued.

He looked down.

“She offered to erase them.””

I stared at him.

“After the accident, she contacted me.””

His voice became quieter.

“She said you would never recover. She said you were suffering.””

A bitter laugh escaped him.

“I believed her.””

The room fell silent.

Then he reached into his pocket.

He pulled out a small recording device.

“I recorded our last conversation.””

My heart jumped.

Proof.

Finally.

“She admitted everything.””

He placed the device on the nightstand.

“But there’s a problem.””

Of course there was.

There was always a problem.

“What?”” I wanted to ask.

Gabriel looked at the window.

“Your wife knows I’m having doubts.””

My pulse increased.

“How?””

“She saw me searching through your files.””

He looked back at me.

“She thinks I’m becoming a liability.””

A cold feeling moved through me.

“Matthew…”

He stepped closer.

“She may try to remove both of us before Friday.””

The room suddenly felt like it had no air.

Both of us.

Before Friday.

My phone vibrated.

Gabriel looked at it.

I couldn’t move.

The screen lit up.

A message from Sofia.

*“Dad, I’m outside.””*

My heart nearly stopped.

Outside.

She was already here.

I tried to move.

Nothing.

I tried again.

Nothing.

Gabriel noticed my panic.

“Your daughter?””

I moved my fingers.

Yes.

He looked toward the door.

Then his face changed.

“What is it?””

I wanted to know.

He was staring at something behind me.

A shadow.

In the reflection of the window.

Someone was standing in the hallway.

Watching.

Gabriel slowly walked toward the door.

He opened it.

The hallway was empty.

But something was on the floor.

A piece of paper.

He picked it up.

His expression changed as he read it.

“What does it say?”” I needed to know.

He didn’t answer immediately.

Then he handed it to me.

I couldn’t pick it up.

So he placed it where I could see.

Three words were written in black ink.

*“I know, Matthew.””*

My blood froze.

Below it was a signature.

Not Beatriz.

Not Alvin.

Not Gabriel.

Someone else.

Someone who knew my secret.

Someone who knew I was awake.

The handwriting belonged to Sofia.

And beneath the signature was one final sentence.

*“Dad, I know you can hear me.””*

I stared at the note.

My daughter had known for longer than I realized.

But the question that terrified me wasn’t how she knew.

It was why she had waited.

Then my phone rang.

The call came from Sofia’s number.

Gabriel picked it up.

“Hello?””

Silence.

Then a man’s voice answered.

Not Sofia.

A voice I recognized.

A voice that made my entire body go cold.

Alvin.

“Doctor,” my brother said calmly.

“You need to leave the house.””

Gabriel froze.

“Where is Sofia?””

A pause.

Then Alvin laughed softly.

“She made the mistake of coming here alone.””

My heart stopped.

Gabriel’s face turned pale.

And then Alvin whispered the words that told me the truth.

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“She knows too much.””

The call ended.

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